Josh

Great work! I think a little explanation dialog might make it stronger though.

Anali

Hi, Kiyong you have a unique way to tell a story, you keep me intrigued and wanting to know more.. it was heartbreaking and very emotional, and you made me feel your story. I didn’t get the importance of the shoe… and I have doubts about the story (it can be clearer I guess) but it was a great job! I’m going to look at your other galleries to understand better and give you better feedback.

Keep working on this, you have a unique vision (:

Matthew

Excellent work

Salvador

I am so confused by this story...
I love the drawings and the limited use of color.
I'm just so confused by the story.
It looks very beautiful though.
I'm sorry, I just wish I had more to say.