Tatev

I love the art and the story!! The depth and colors are awesome!! Great job

Gorety (1 like, 1 helpful)

I really liked the story, and the art was really good, maybe next time you could show a bit about Lunas family being hurt :))

William (1 like, 1 helpful)

Audio quality could improve a little, but the actual story was really well made. Plus the Art was very good!

Sadie (1 like, 1 helpful)

I’m so happy that Amber and Luna forgave each other in the end!
I really love the aesthetic and colors of this story, and the character designs are amazing too!
(Also I love Mossy and Sparkle. They are absolutely precious! 😻)
My only comment is that it was slightly difficult to understand that Luna’s family was hurt in the beginning, though it cleared up a bit as the story went on. If you intended for it to be that was that’s cool too, just pointing out something that was not entirely clear.
Other than that I love this short film and it makes me a bit sad that their story is over. 🥹
You did a great job with this! 👍😊

akèso (1 like, 1 helpful)

good sound design along with the story that really communicated a feel during much of the story when dialogue wasn't present. I love the drawings and colour scheme. You can tell a lot of thought and work went into this. I like the magic in the story and how it was a healing journey.

Olivia (1 like, 1 helpful)

I love the character designs as well as the color pallets being amazing! The designs of the necklaces are simple but work wonderfully to show the foils between the characters. I also like that Amber turned her necklace into an earring. There's a lot happening in this submission. I found it a bit hard to keep track of the plot points. The plot moved very quickly from one section to another. It didn't give breathing room or time for the audience to know what happened. I think it would be helpful if you slowed down and fleshed out the sections a bit more. The voice acting was amazing I love it a lot, as well as the sound effects here and there, made it feel more put together. I love this story a lot and want to see you take it further. I hope you do. Good luck with whatever you do now!