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I tweaked the ending a little, and filled in drawings in the places where I had left title cards/placeholders in the last draft. This was a fun time! But I'm outta time, too, so this is the as-finished-as-it's-gonna-get-for-now final draft. Thanks to everyone who gave feedback and helped me whip this thing into some kind of shape. Looking forward to coming back to it in a bit and making something a little more finished.
If you'd like to keep in touch, I'm on ig and discord as another_lousy_tourist
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Another Lousy Tourist
William
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Archie's Story: Storyreel Final Draft
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