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Still a wip and its a mess. Reel so far is different from my latest outline. Hope this is okay.

Act I
* The story opens with a panoramic shot of a beautiful valley, surrounded by majestic mountains and filled with colorful floating plants called Nair. The narrator explains that Nair is a rare fruit with healing properties, and that the valley is home to a small village of people who rely on the Nair for their livelihood.
* We meet Lysa, a young girl who lives in the village with her older sister Riya. Riya is a confident raven rider, who rides a giant bird called a draven and helps the volpirays, giant flying foxes, navigate through the valley. Lysa looks up to her sister and wants to become a raven rider like her, but she is afraid of heights and insects.
* The village is abuzz with excitement because the volpirays are due to fly through the valley soon, but Riya is out of town delivering supplies. Lysa is worried that she will have to face her fears alone, but her friends and family encourage her to be brave.

Act II
* Suddenly, the volpirays appear earlier than expected, causing chaos in the village. Lysa must overcome her fears and help the volpirays navigate through the valley, while trying to figure out why they have come early this year.
* Lysa enlists the help of her friends and together, they embark on an exciting adventure to help the volpirays and save the Nair. Along the way, they face challenges and obstacles, but they never give up and always support each other.
* As they journey through the valley, Lysa begins to face her fears and becomes more confident and brave. She bonds with her draven and learns how to control it, just like her sister.

Act III
* Eventually, Lysa and her friends discover that the volpirays have come early because their natural habitat is in danger and they need the Nair to survive. With the help of the raven riders and the villagers, they come up with a plan to save the volpirays and protect their valley.
* In the climactic finale, Lysa and her friends bravely face the dangers and challenges, using their skills and determination to save the volpirays and the Nair. In the end, Lysa becomes a true raven rider and the village is saved.
* The story ends with a shot of the village, surrounded by the beautiful Nair, and the narrator explains that the villagers and the raven riders will always be there to protect their valley and the creatures that live there.

Moral: The story teaches the importance of facing your fears and working together to overcome challenges and help others. It also highlights the value of protecting the environment and the creatures that live in it.

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Lenin Angelo

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