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Acts 1,2,3 Minor beats

Act 1

Once upon a time, in a world where magical beings were separated from the mortals because the majority of them are evil. There were two cat-witch sisters named Roxie and Trixie who worked at a witchcraft supermarket.

A few years ago, Roxie was great at her job as an assistant manager, and Trixie worked as a stock girl using her magic but she rather studies her spell book.

Now a days, Roxie realized how tired she was from working at the supermarket. Trixie was the leader of a group of activists for magical rights with very little to no results of change.

On a slow workday, during her break, Roxie went to the coffee shop nearby to grab some lunch. She loved going there every lunch break to destress. She loves their vibe, the warm service from the employees that know her favorite orders, and the comforting seats.

While she was eating, she portal-called Trixie to talk to her about how she was so over her job and the magical oppression. Trixie listened while she was practicing magic at their apartment and reminded her about that big dream she had about having her own coffee business.

Every day, Roxie tries to find a good restaurant for sale on her laptop. She searched and searched day and night but couldn’t find the right one. When she was about to give up, Trixie decided to help her with the search.

One early morning, Trixie woke Roxie up to show her what she found on her laptop. It’s an ad for a beautiful restaurant building for sale but it was in a city where witches are banned!
Trixie told her an idea she had about going undercover as mortal baristas running the coffee shop, and when they gain the community’s love and trust they will reveal themselves as good witches.

Roxie thought that was a very dangerous idea and mentioned how their parents got killed when they had the same idea and open up a bakery in a city where magic is banned. They used to be magical activists like Trixie.

That’s one of the reasons why Trixie wants to go with the mission, to honor her parents. She kept convincing Roxie to change her mind, and when she got to her, she called their bank. Trixie called the ad sales company to buy the restaurant.

Until one day, one year later at the witchcraft store, they were ready to quit, so Roxie went to the store manager’s office.

Roxie sincerely told their store manager Scott that she and Trixie were quitting today to open their coffee shop business. Scott was shocked because it was the holiday season.
Roxie said she was sorry and said goodbye as she walked out of his office. She found Trixie saying goodbye to their coworkers while holding shopping bags.
Scott walked out of his office in anger catching up to them as they were leaving to say that their business will never work out because they’re Witches.

Act 2

1. Because of that, Today, their coffee shop was open for business and attracted their first customer.

She is a popular social media fitness influencer name Ms. Fluff who is willing to promote their coffee shop.
She wants them to create a particular one-of-a-kind holiday frappuccino.
2. Because of that, Roxie went to the back room to create the frappuccino. She was grabbing all the ingredients until she notice that something was missing.
Roxie nervously called Trixie to help her in the backroom. Roxie panicked and told Trixie they didn’t have Peppermint Mocha! It was the one ingredient that was sold out and hard to find because of the holidays.
She anxiously looked for alternatives in the storage room.
3. Because of that, Trixie grabbed her spell book and wand to attempt to conjure the frappuccino with magic.
Roxie came out of the storage room to find Trixie with her spell book.
Roxie tried to take her book, afraid of being caught by Ms. Fluff.
The two got into a heated magical altercation.
4. Because of that, Ms. Fluff was becoming impatience while on her phone.
Trixie used her magic to stick Roxie to the wall and shut her mouth tightly.
Roxie tried to move around to break free but the magic was too strong.
Trixie didn’t want Ms. Fluff to leave them with a bad review when they just opened, so she quickly cast the spell to create the frappuccino. The spell would make the drink irresistible.
Act 3

Until finally, Trixie quickly came out with the frappuccino just in time when Ms. Fluff was about to leave.

Trixie said please don’t leave and would apologize to Ms. Fluff for taking too long and begged her to try the frappuccino saying that it was on the house.

The influencer walked back to the counter and took a sip of the frap. She loves the taste of it. She was so satisfied with her drink that she forgave them and shared the news about their coffee shop across social media. Trixie freed Roxie from the wall and both were relieved.

When Ms. Fluff left, Roxie had a deep conversation with Trixie about how she was so worried about ending up like their parents. Trixie talked to her about why they should use magic for situations like this and that taking a big risk is okay if it leads to changing society for the better. She said that their parents would want them to change the world.




And ever since then, Roxie and Trixie used magic for emergencies only and made sure they were always prepared for anything it takes to run a coffee shop.

Roxie learns to be brave and practice using her magic more. Overcoming the fear she had and willing to fight when the mission failed.
Trixie learns to be more of a mortal and that she doesn’t have to use magic to do everything.
Both of them have a goal to change the world for magical beings one coffee at a time.

The moral of the story is if you have a big dream, you have to take a big risk.

Hey Guys, can I get feedback on my story, please?

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