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Blue’s Tale - Act 3 Draft

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This is an outline for my final act: Act 3! Thank you to all who have followed Blue on his journey this far. 😊
Also, I love and very much appreciate feedback!
Here is my story spine that I used to create these scenes:
7. Until finally - Still recovering after his tragic loss, Blue is taken under the wing of the domestic lions and their companions.
Minor beat - The girl introduces herself as Ziggy (nickname given to her by her troup), and expresses how she had absence seizures and wants to help Blue overcome them too.
Minor beat - Blue discovers the troop (in which the domestic lions train to fight evil spirits), train together as a family, and all support each other. Blue also notices that the humans train as well, but use martial arts to accompany the lions.
Minor beat - Blue is assigned by the older masters to train under Ziggy, and soon forms a close bond with her.
Minor beat - After hard training, Blue successfully scares off an evil spirit, thanks to the support he has received from his new community.

8. And ever since then, Blue found a community among the domestic lions, where he could feel a sense of importance, but most importantly, belonging.
Minor beat - Blue learned most things are difficult to achieve yourself, and that support and help will get you places much faster
Minor beat - At the end, Ziggy ties a red ribbon around Blue’s horn, symbolizing his transition from the wild lions of the forest to the domestic lion community, his new home.

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