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Blue’s Act 1 and 2, revised

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This is my Act two for Blue’s story, and the Act 1 (revised to fit better) tied in as well! I hope you all like it!
Also, I love feedback and it is very appreciated! 😁
Here is my extended story spine for Act two (my guideline for the reel, it continues off from the first 3 parts of the spine):
4. Because of that - After replaying the memories in his mind, Blue decides to run away from home. (the forest)
Minor beat- Blue is hesitant at first, since he has lived in the forest his entire life.
Minor beat - Blue struggles between his family and another community.
Minor beat - Blue is timid, but explores the human world, and discovers the domestic lions not only protect humans but also help with day-to-day activities.

5. Because of that - shortly after arriving at the human world, Blue meets a domestic lion and its human companion.
Minor beat- The human and lion notice immediately that Blue acts strangely; he is having absence seizures (a type of epilepsy, which is a disorder that occurs when nerve cell activity is disturbed)
Minor beat - The human and lion want to help Blue with his struggles and achieve his goals, so they pursue him.
Minor beat - Instead of accepting their help, Blue insists he achieves his goals on his own and goes looking for an evil spirit.

6. Because of that - as a result of denying help, Blue tries to protect a human from an evil spirit and loses the battle terribly.
Minor beat- Blue tries to mimic the lion he saw in the forest, but he realizes he does not have the experience he needs.
Minor beat- Blue panics and tries to run, but has a seizure, leaving him standing staring blank, straight at the evil spirit.
Minor beat- The minute Blue snaps out of his state the evil spirit deals a hard blow and Blue is left passed out surrounded by flames

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