The Death of our Sun
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due to time restraints and personal issues, I wasn't able to change the fact that I want to portray the queen and the kingdom as very reactionary and how the queen(who is a star entity outside of the sun so not even native) promotes the belief that the Sun is sacred and outer space is too dangerous. also, I'm not too confident in the story so feedback on it is very much appreciated!!
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