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I'm sorry my audio is a little bad this time around, I couldn't get the fixture to work this time around. But for a little more detail for Dawn and Colla, I gave them a soft past and future motif respectively. Not sure how well that played, out. I'm defiantly going to redesign the pocket watch clock. I also fleshed out the couple's own conflicts they face but didn't want to share that because the video was getting a bit long as is. Sorry, the artwork this time around is not that clean. But I hope y'all like the characters. Feedback would be great! Please let me know if y'all like the working title of "Timeless".
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