Timeless Act 1 - A Adventitious Date
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I'm sorry that for parts of it I was talking faster than intended. My nose is stuffy and holding back a sneeze while recording is not fun. Do not recommend it. But apart from that, I think this is a better fleshed-out Act 1 than I had before, I know it could still have some work. Which I plan to do before the final. Also, the audio didn't cut out at the end, that's the connection voice line for Act 2. Ummm, I hope y'all like this. And hopefully, I find some actual voices to use for the actual short. lol
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