Blue’s Story: Act 1!
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This is my act one for Blue’s story! I hope you like it!
This is the first 3 sections of my Story spine:
Once upon a time - There was a traditional Chinese lion named Blue.
Minor beat - Blue is different from the other lions, because of his Blue color, but also his motives and curiosity.
Minor beat - Blue is close to his family, but sometimes he feels like he doesn't belong/fit in with them either.
Every day - Blue would roam and explore the forest.
Minor beat - Blue would especially enjoy watching the older lions, who were deeply admired by the community for their ability to climb trees and gather food.
Minor beat - Blue deeply wants to feel useful and belonging in his community, tries to climb trees, gather fruit, and even catch fish.
Minor beat - Blue doesn't do well in any of these activities, and feels ready to give up.
Until one day - Blue watches a human be attacked by an evil spirit, and then witnesses a strange “tamed”, or domestic lion, save her.
Minor beat - Blue is at first surprised, but then amazed and curious and wants to learn more.
Minor beat - Blue lingers at home (forest), but cannot resist the thought of another place of belonging in the human world.
Minor beat - Blue becomes more and more curious and excited.
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