
Jack
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I picked my modified what if question, "What if a boy discovers a buried alien space ship with a sentient AI still aboard?" This is the boy I envision for that story. He's plagued with school work and will be confronted with helping an alien AI while dealing with his already full schedule. He'll have to navigate those pressures and hopefully learn a few lessons along the way.

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