Timeless - Act 1 & 2 - Reflections
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Olivia
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I'm sorry for the length of this video. I had finally written the script for Timeless. So I thought it best to have both put together with their scripted parts to see how they flow. I already know I need better transitions for the Act 2 beats. I will work on that. Also, I am sorry for the poor quality of the drawings during the Act two section my wrist was hurting, and for some reason, the photos came out blurry. When I do get a chance I am going to redraw everything to be clean for the finished product. I do hope y'all enjoy this. ( I am sorry for my awful voice acting. I tried to make sure each character could be differentiated but I'm not sure how well that came across. ) But uh hope y'all enjoy Colla and Dawn's story so far.
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